I found it entertaining.
Your lisp added character. I have a crappy machine, so of course it bogged down at the intensive parts (the flaming forest, etc). You should work on your timing to make it a bit more funnier, but the jokes had potential. I would not let the idiot blammers get you down. They want to see game sprites tentacle raping traced over hentai images anyway. Keep up the good work. Peace.